Hi Va'a, You have written such a detailed information report on the kiwi birds. I have a question for you? What sources- links, websites and videos you used to find and get your information on kiwi birds? Did you use the sources I shared with you or did you find your own? Also, next time before publishing your work could you please proofread it. For example- where you have written "they dig with there beaks" - there should be "their". Keep up with the awesome learning.
OK Manpreet sorry for the mistakes I'l fix's it and thanks for leaving a comment there for me I really appreciate it. Also I loved your Videos that you posted on the class sight and iv'e done the Virus writing and I did my math's. Thanks Manpreet Hope you have a good holiday.☺☺
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Hi Va'a,
ReplyDeleteYou have written such a detailed information report on the kiwi birds. I have a question for you? What sources- links, websites and videos you used to find and get your information on kiwi birds? Did you use the sources I shared with you or did you find your own?
Also, next time before publishing your work could you please proofread it. For example- where you have written "they dig with there beaks" - there should be "their".
Keep up with the awesome learning.
OK Manpreet sorry for the mistakes I'l fix's it and thanks for leaving a comment there for me I really appreciate it. Also I loved your Videos that you posted on the class sight and iv'e done the Virus writing and I did my math's. Thanks Manpreet Hope you have a good holiday.☺☺
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